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Hallo, ik ben van plan om te solliciteren bij een internationaal bedrijf. De vacature is wel opgesteld in het Nederlands maar in de vacature zelf staat wel te lezen dat de bedrijfstaal het engels is. Daarom wil ik dus niet een gewone Nederlandstalige motivatiebrief binnen sturen maar wel een engelse.

Ik heb reeds een eerste ontwerp gemaakt. Wil iemand hier wat feedback op geven?

"Dear Mr., Ms.

When I was looking for a challenging job, I saw that the jobsite “VDAB.be” is currently running your ad for dynamic talents in operations and client services department. I am exceptionally interested in the advertisement and therefore I am applying for the vacancy. You will find from reading my enclosed resume that I have all the qualifications you demand of a dynamic talent.

My degree of bachelor business management, option finance and insurance at the university college Ghent, followed by my master degree business administration, option finance and risk management, which I should obtain within this and 3 weeks have given me a very rich mixture of both the theoretical and practical sides of the financial and economical fields.
For example in the last year of the bachelor education we studied how the national and international funds are being transferred. A field in which Euroclear plays a key role. Furthermore I learned about all the types of financial assets and received a good language training during my education. Moreover, I had the opportunity to put the theory into practice during two very enriching work placements.

I would be very contented to be able to work in an expanding company like yours. I trust that you will consider my application favourably and grant me an interview. I am available for an interview at your convenience.

Yours sincerely

XXX"""

Alvast bedankt!