Feedback stagebrief (engels)

[Honeyblossom]

Ik ben bezig met een sollicitatiebrief voor mijn eindstage. Ik ben niet zo heel goed in brievenschrijven, zouden jullie willen kijken wat ik nog kan toevoegen en verbeteren aan de brief voordat ik hem verstuur?
Alvast bedankt!

mijn brief:

PLAATS, DATUM

Regarding: Internship airport

Dear Mrs. XXXX

I am a student at XXXX College in XXXX and I am in my last year of my study. With this letter I would like to inform about the possibility of an internship at the airport in XXXX for five months.

I am in my last year of my study Aviation Service and for my final internship I have to do an internship at an airport. Last year we had some presentation at school about an internship in XXXX and it was very interesting. I did my other internships in Spain and Belgium and that was a great experience. I see an internship at an International Airport as a big opportunity to learn more about working at an airport and to learn more about the culture in XXXX.

I hope I give enough information about myself and I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

MIJN NAAM

Enclosure: CV