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MIJN ADRES
The Netherlands
Gerst Lane Crčche
Attn: The Personnel Manager
41 Gerst Lane
London IG3 8XE
Great Britain
20 March 2010
Dear Madam,
On reference to your advertisement in the ....Courant the last 2nd of March I would like to apply for the job as group leader.
My name is .... and I’m a student at college studying child care, which I will finish at the end of May.
After my graduation I would like to work as a group leader.
During my trainee period I’ve worked at a verticale group for flexible day care. Due to this I’ve had a lot of experience in the contacts with children from several ages.
Because of the flexible day care it is essential to be flexible myself and have a good adaptability.
Children are spontaneous, they are honest. You can already have a short conversation with them and I think that’s important. And I think the relationship with the parents is also important.
I love to work in a team but I think working independant is fine too.
I think a good and open communication is important with this, but also against the parents is this a important part.
I think your organization is positive to me, especially working at verticale groups.
These I really liked during my trainee period.
I look forward to an opportunity to speak with you in person. Then I would like to clarify my motivation.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
MIJN NAAM